am currently working on our new website and have all the wording roughly in place but need your expertise to make it better:
Concept: We will provide a brief overview of how Yogo Bespoke can help you to design and build your new home. We’ll also talk you though what you can expect from us at every stage of the process. Briefing: We will arrange an initial briefing meeting for you to tell us all your ideas and aspirations for your new house, then explain in greater detail how Yogo Bespoke can meet these expectations. Planning: We will submit the scheme to the Local Authority for planning approval. Hopefully, you should receive consent within 8-12 weeks of the submission. Design: Our designers will delve into the plans in more detail. While you’re reviewing and approving our ideas, we’ll be arranging all the required reports and finalising the specifications and finishes. Contract: We will carry out a detailed cost analysis for the project. This will be the binding commitment and will contain the contract price, completion date, specification and payment arrangements. Build Phase: We will commence work on discharging the pre-start planning conditions. This will allow the actual demolition and construction phase to commence. After Sales: We have our own in-house after sales team – often considered to be the best in the business – who will remain at your service until you’re ready to bring the luxury design service to an end. Completion: When we have completed and obtained the final certificates from warranty providers and the Local Authority building inspectors, we will hand over the finished property!
I have taken various paragraphs from other websites and would like our own twist on it.